If I could move your mountains
If I could breathe a new breath
Into every lost faith
And save the hope you have left
Then you would see my wonder
Then you would feel my best
Bring you right from under
Dying love’s last death
Might I have misplaced fear here?
Might I have seen this right?
Only you know, dear
Show me through your eyes
When you see right through me
When we win this fight
Will I take you for granted?
Will you take me for life?
In your eyes are answers
Like the stars in the night
Your universe canters
Into mine without spite
This time is remembered
Through dark we found light
And tomorrow we entered
‘Cause tonight was the night
Most of those rhymes were so subtle it made the whole thing, along with the darker broody atmospheric chime. Nice!
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Thank you so much. I sometimes wonder if my writing is too cryptic, but you seem to understand me precisely. That means the world. Thank you.
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Life is not a problem to be solved, but a reality to be experienced.
Soren Kierkegaard
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Beautiful Work
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Thank you very much, kind sir.
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